Slip N Steel

You did a good job using perspective here, especially on the portrait on the wall. It looks like it's actually flat on the wall. The subject's hands and feet are drawn beautifully, and the pose is good. Good contrapposto. I think you could get a little bit more action out of the pose, though, by making the arms not quite as stiff. That should give it a more relaxed look.

The subject looks a bit flat compared to the background. A bit more shading on her might remedy this. I like the shading you did on the carpet.

One thing that might help your subject pop out more is to use bolder colors on the subject than the ones you use on the background. I feel like my eye is being drawn toward the gorgeous background more than the subject because she's more muted. If you want to focus more on the subject, you might try reversing it and making the subject bolder than the background.

Overall, good work on everything!